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It Isn't Even A Page Long

I read your words today,
Barely capturing the meaning of them
Under the dusty letters and webbed pages.

Please read from start to finish
And comment only
When you have given a thorough thought.


Of what you are about to say.
Is it what you really mean to say?
Or is it what you should say?

I don't understand and neither do you.
If one doesn't do what the other won't
Then who will decide?


Ok then,
The answer will always be yes--
Actually, it was nerrasphere.

But that was yesterday
When we had nothing better to do
But run through an orange light.


Have fun and don't die,
Go to sleep and wake up.
Eat food and live you're life.

If I actually started rhyming,
This would turn into utter nonsense.
Not that it isn't already.
:iconthatbookishwriter:
Just something that I wrote a couple of days ago. It was the evening and I was tired. Every other verse is supposed to be italicized, but I'm not sure how to do that on DA.

Explanation of the word 'Nerrasphere': You are right. It is not even a word in the dictionary. It was made up in my digital studios 2 class when our student teacher kept on saying ''Don't forget to use Nerritive and atmosphere !!!'' while we were working on our projects. A kid in my class combined the words and came up with 'Nerrasphere'

EDIT: K. I'm trying to put in the italics (with some info from DJChocolatelover). Let's see if I can actually get this to work !

(C) Me
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:icon04belgarion2k7:
~04belgarion2k7 Jan 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Interesting poem...I like the italics on the verses and the imagery you use.

Only correction: first line - 'you're' should be 'your'

This is a really great poem :D
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~ThatBookishWriter Jan 8, 2011  Student Writer
why thank you ! :)
thanks for noticing the grammer-I try to remember, but as seen, I sometimes forget. :(
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~04belgarion2k7 Jan 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
No problems, and everyone forgets...we are only human after all :)
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~ThatBookishWriter Jan 8, 2011  Student Writer
yeah, thanks :)
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~DJChocolate-Lover Jan 7, 2011  Student General Artist
This is quite cool, confusing but cool.
To do italics you put < i > with out gaps and < /i > without gaps to end them.
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~ThatBookishWriter Jan 7, 2011  Student Writer
yeah, it's supposed to be a bit random.
thanks for the italics info. I'll try to work with that :)
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This is really cool :D
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~ThatBookishWriter Dec 15, 2010  Student Writer
thanks :D
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~YoYo788 Dec 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
interesting :)
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~ThatBookishWriter Dec 9, 2010  Student Writer
thanks :D
and thank you for the fav :)
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